my poem

[rajesh arora]

karte ho tum pyaar agar to itna jaan lo,
apne us pyaar ko sab kuch maan lo.
uski khushi me agar khush tum raho,
agar aye koi gham to tum kaho.
pyaar hai to ye zindagi hai,
pyaar he to khuda ki bandagi hai.

[Sonia_Nz]

vah vah vah
oii raaaj kyaa poem likhii hai
maaan gayeeee
good work......hope to hear some more awesum shayeri lke this one frum u

[Sona]

Well said Rajesh.... nice poem


like it .. keep it up

Originally Posted by rajesh arora karte ho tum pyaar agar to itna jaan lo, apne us pyaar ko sab kuch maan lo. uski khushi me agar khush tum raho, agar aye koi gham to tum kaho. pyaar hai to ye zindagi hai, pyaar he to khuda ki bandagi hai.

[kyoot_bonny]

Boy s are like apples on trees. The best ones are at the top of the
tree. The girls don't want to reach for the good ones because they're
afraid of falling and getting hurt. Instead they just get the rotten
apples that are on the ground, that aren't as good, but easy.

So the apples at the top think that there is something wrong with
them, when in reality, they are amazing. That is why we just have to
be a little patient and the right girl, the one who takes a chance to
find the good, right apple, will come someday

[Sona]

What u mean bonny..................r u compare urself wid apple at top of the tree ????/

lols Bonny(Apple)

Originally Posted by kyoot_bonny Boy s are like apples on trees. The best ones are at the top of the tree. The girls don't want to reach for the good ones because they're afraid of falling and getting hurt. Instead they just get the rotten apples that are on the ground, that aren't as good, but easy. So the apples at the top think that there is something wrong with them, when in reality, they are amazing. That is why we just have to be a little patient and the right girl, the one who takes a chance to find the good, right apple, will come someday

[!~RAjPUT~!]

raj ooyee gud man ... te bonny yaar koi ne aaugi koi na koi aaugi mai v udeek karda peya hann ..

[kyoot_bonny]

Originally Posted by SONA What u mean bonny..................r u compare urself wid apple at top of the tree ????/ lols Bonny(Apple)

sona ji je thonnu mai top wala apple lagda fer aake todd lao......ya fer thalle diggiaan applaan chon hee kise nu chukkna

[Ramin]

kya baat hai rajesh jii......tusi ta bahut vadde shayar jaapde a..

Originally Posted by Sonia_Nz vah vah vah oii raaaj kyaa poem likhii hai maaan gayeeee good work......hope to hear some more awesum shayeri lke this one frum u