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This is a discussion on Umara De Saravar by: Shiv Kumar Batalvi within the Literature forums, part of the Contributions category; Umaraan De Saravar by: Shiv Kumar Batalvi Umaraan de sarvar SaahvaaN da paani Geeta ve chuNjh bhareeN Bhalke na rehanhe ...
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03-08-2005, 10:21 PM
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Rep Power: 136  | Umara De Saravar by: Shiv Kumar Batalvi Umaraan De Saravar by: Shiv Kumar Batalvi Umaraan de sarvar SaahvaaN da paani Geeta ve chuNjh bhareeN Bhalke na rehanhe PeeRaaN de chaanan HaavaaN de haNs sareeN. Geeta ve chuNjh bhareeN Geeta ve UmaraaN de sarvar chaliiye Pal-chin bhar suk jaaNde. SaahvaaN de paani Peele ve arhiya Anchaahiya phiT jaaNde. Bhalke na saahnu daeeN ulaambhaRa Bhalke ne ros kareeN Geeta ve chuNjh bhareeN HaavaaN de haNs SuneeNde ve lobhi, Dil marda taaN gaaNde. Ih birhoN rut haNjhu chugde Chugde te uhD jaaNde. Aese uDde maar uDaari MuR na aaun ghareeN, Geeta ve chuNjh bhareeN Geeta ve, ChuNj bhare taaN teri Sone chuNj maRaavaaN. Mae chaNdari teri bardi theevaaN Naal theeae parCHaavaaN, HaaRa e ve Na tu tirhaaiya Mere vaaNg mareeN, Geeta ve chuNjh bhareeN Umara de saravar SaahvaaN da paani Geeta ve chuNj bhareeN Bhalke na rehanhe PeeRaaN de chaanan HaavaaN de haNs sareeN. Geeta ve chuNjh bhareeN | |
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04-08-2005, 12:33 AM
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Rep Power: 167  | Re: Umara De Saravar by: Shiv Kumar Batalvi ki pucchde o haal fakira da... sada nadiyo vicchde nira da, sada hanj de juni aya da sada dil jalya dilgira da, li pucchde o haal fakira da........ eh jaan deya kucch shokh jihe rangan da naa tasvira hai jad hatt gaye asi ishqe di mull kar baithe tasviran da... ki pucchde o............ | |
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04-08-2005, 07:08 AM
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Rep Power: 176  | Re: Umara De Saravar by: Shiv Kumar Batalvi shiv kumar batalvi is the best main 12th ch ohna de likiyan kavitawa pariya si ..i really like em | |
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04-08-2005, 06:41 PM
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Rep Power: 0 | Re: Umara De Saravar by: Shiv Kumar Batalvi punjabi sahitya marda ja reha hai. sms rahin forward kiti ja rahi punjabi shero shayari shayad hi koi lok dillon samaj ke apreciate karde ne. khair jaan ke changa lageya kuch lok aje vi shiv kumar batalvi varge kaviyayan nu yaad rakhde ne. meri apni manpasand kavita surjeet patar di likhi hoyi hai... 'hawa ban ke' koi daliyan chon langeyan hawa ban ke asin reh gaye birkh wali ha ban ke paidan teriyan door door teek mere patte digge meriyan baharan da gunah ban ke peya ambiyan nu boor si ke koyal kook payi kise jind biyaban di gawah ban ke kadi bandeyan de wang sanu mileya vi kar aivein lang janain paani kade hawa ban ke jadon mileyan si haan da si sanwara jeha jadon juda hoyeya turr geya khuda ban ke! mere khayal hor lokan nu punjabi kahaniyan te kavitavan padniyan chahidiyan ne. punjabi lekhak hun bahle nahi rahe...punjabi sahitya nu bachouna hun sadde hath vich hi hai. ssa | |
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05-08-2005, 02:48 AM
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Rep Power: 0 | Re: Umara De Saravar by: Shiv Kumar Batalvi Shiv Kumar Batalvi - Zindagi uske liye ik maut thi, Vo pa gaya hai asal dar zindagi marne ke baad. | |
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07-08-2005, 11:14 PM
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Rep Power: 0 | Re: Umara De Saravar by: Shiv Kumar Batalvi I have written a Shardhanjali to Shiv Kumar. Read it at Allpoetry.com by Punjabi Putter. you all will like it. Shiv is one of the best poets Punjabs. | |
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Rep Power: 0 | Re: Umara De Saravar by: Shiv Kumar Batalvi Here is my shardhanjali to Shiv Kumar Likhari Punjab deya..... kehde kahneyan diyan si kalman teria ghadiyan, kehdi seyahi da rang enna guhda? Kehde kikker di chhaven beh ke tun likhiya? Kehdi ma di god bani tera bhanguda? kis bhen ne tenun rakhdi bhanni? kehdian mundran tennun kannin chumeya? kis ma ne tenun dhidon jammeya kis rah ne tenun perin chummeya? kehde Guruan tere maththe chumme? kinnhan retean tere dane bhunne? kihdi likhi tun pothi padeya? kis ladi layi tun ghodi chadeya? Likh ke tur geyen chaar kitaban tasviran supne arman te khwaban padan waale ne aj wi ronde kiyun nahin sare tere warge hunde? Lokaan tere geet sun laye Tera dukh kise na janeya lakhaan tera sees chumm gaye Par mukhda kise na pachhaneya Haniya we...Haniya... kiyun nahin sare tere warge hunde? ......dedicated to Shiv Kumar Batalvi, the best poetof his time in Punjabi langugage. From Punjabi Putter, living in germany. More to read from me at All Poetry.com. | |
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