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This is a discussion on Ghazal within the Literature forums, part of the Contributions category; ............. Ghazal ..........Kaka Gill Ajj dekh lai tere shehar di rivaayat yaaraa Menu tere utte nahin zindagi utte shikaayat yaaraa ...

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Old 29-07-2005, 07:55 PM   #1 (permalink)
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.............Ghazal..........Kaka Gill

Ajj dekh lai tere shehar di rivaayat yaaraa
Menu tere utte nahin zindagi utte shikaayat yaaraa

patthar bathere khaa lae lahoo bathera veh chukkyaa
Bach gya sadkaa tere pyaar di himaayat yaaraa

Zulam rajjke ih smaaj aashiqaan te dhaounda hai
Parkhe pyaar patthraan naal kare na riaayat yaaraa

Meny vishvaash hai teri muhabbat di vafaa te
Vafaa lai zindagi denhi zaroori hai nihaayat yaaraa

Milaange ikk din zaroor udeek meri toon karni
Bass eni hor kar kar mere te inaayat yaaraa

Pehlaan jitthe milde si uh thaan aje veeraan
Men aake parh lavaangaa likh jaanhaa hidaayat yaaraa

Agar mil na sake aapaaN khudkashi kar lavaange
Basera karaange jitthe vassdi aashiqaan di jamaayat yaaraa
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Old 29-07-2005, 09:39 PM   #2 (permalink)
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wah wah wah...bohot vadiya....thanks for sharin.......
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Old 30-07-2005, 05:35 AM   #3 (permalink)
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likhi tu ghazal be-wafayi yara..
parhke mainu badi neend aayi yara..

nah.. I'm just kidding.. that was a beautiful ghazal. A good effort. Just a few words from me:
Originally Posted by Razia
.............Ghazal..........Kaka Gill

Milaange ikk din zaroor udeek meri toon karni
Bass eni hor kar kar mere te inaayat yaaraa
Na karin intzaar, na vekhin rah mera..
Na karin intzaar, na vekhin rah mera..
yakeen mainu meri manzil te hai.. ehna rahan te nahin..!
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Old 30-07-2005, 08:35 AM   #4 (permalink)
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bahut nice gazal a yaar keep it upp.its better if u can give us u r intro....
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Wow thats nice gal u got talent
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Wow thats nice gal u got talent
osne nahi likhi Kaka gill di likhi hoyi aa,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,dhyaan naal pad laya kar
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oops kaka gil ji very nice ghazall
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hun kehndi a kaka ni nice gazal....ehda matbal tusi gazal pari ni oddan i appriciate kari jandey a...hehehhe chori teri fadi gayi
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oops kaka gil ji very nice ghazall
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awww nice gazal razia n jailer saab:P(sydney beere)
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Bahut shukrya ji: kudi pateole vargi, punjabi ic. sweet sohni kudi, pps 309........

Well, I am from Pakistan. 35 years old. Unmarried......I taught myself to read gurmukhi because in Pakistan they write Punjabi in urdu. I wanted to get familiar with the literaure produced in Indian Punjab.....

Thats all.

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