!!! Meri Kalam De Bol !!!

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ssa dosto ajj ik uprala kita thode baii ne....

ajj chukki hai kalam yaro...

ajj chukki hai pehli vari main kalam yaro,
chukkan ton pehlan laggya c main maran yaro,
par nahi isde ukre shabdan ne mainu dassya,
dhaliwal ta ajj jamya hai dobara yaro.
hath vich main fardi hai eh "kalam" kujh is tarah,
vich maidaan de soorme de hath shamsheer jis tarah.
chalavanga main is nu apni takat naal te ukraa ga zindagi de kujh aks dekhyo....kis tarah.
ajj chukki hai main kalam yaro.........

shabad hi ajj mera khuda hai, chala reha hai aaj ye jo kaynat sari vo hi khuda hai ,
vekh manukha dhayaan naal tera dharam, tera karam, tera pita ,teri mata...is duniya da zarrra zarrra khuda hai.
labhda main pathran ch usnu, mainu jhalle nu ki pata mera dil, meri atma hi mera khuda hai ,
khedya jis nal main bachpan ch mera uhi yaar v khuda hai ,
marna ajj jis miti ch sohneya ..oh v khuda hai .
ajj chukki hai pehli vari ......

paleya meri maa ne mainu te khidaya kandhere chuk mere baap ne mainu....yaro mere layi ta oh hi khuda hai.
libdya c main jis miti ajj usi ch mil gaya...mil k pata lagya eh v khuda hai .
bachha c main jinna cheezan layi ronda c ..mere layi ta oh v khuda hai,
mandir gurudware peer paigambar ...bachhe layi sab khuda hai .(mirror is also a miracle for child he sees all in it).
ajj ayi hai thodi samjh yaro ta banai main tasveer yaro....chukki hai ise layi ajj.........

ajj hoya hai mast ranjha hoya oh jawaan c ,
hai oa rabba mehboob vich v rabb hai.

waheguru allah raam rahim....har banda apna apna rabb rakhi firda,
dhaliwala kyon rabb nu pita apne dee jagir samjhi baitha,
kar bure karam kyon nahi tu apni nazar ch girda,
hun hath kalam fad baitha dinda soojh lokan nu baitha darda.

bhull gaya c main duniyadari de gorakh dhande ch fass k,
dhaliwal ajj rab samajh baitha duniya nu us bare dass k,
budhi haddi ch jor nahi ajj kalam fadan da...pata lagga udo jad mazaak kita kise hasss k,
kol rabb de jad jan da pata lagga fer vich kadma apnia sochan de diggya main,
dhoor usde rahan dee fakk k.
ajj fer chukki hai .........

jehre shabad likhan nu chukki c kalam yaro gauh nal dekh us ch v khuda hai.

ise layi ajj chukki c kalam yaro,
talwar na sahi fakiran dee kalam hi jageer yaro,
hun ta labhan apna murshad yaro,
bahut zyada hai is zamane dee peerd yaro.


love n peace
jagdeep singh dhaliwal

[Jatt_on_Jaunt]

Originally Posted by Jatt_on_Jauntz Veer ssa dosto ajj ik uprala kita thode baii ne.... ajj chukki hai kalam yaro... ajj chukki hai pehli vari main kalam yaro, chukkan ton pehlan laggya c main maran yaro, par nahi isde ukre shabdan ne mainu dassya, dhaliwal ta ajj jamya hai dobara yaro. hath vich main fardi hai eh "kalam" kujh is tarah, vich maidaan de soorme de hath shamsheer jis tarah. chalavanga main is nu apni takat naal te ukraa ga zindagi de kujh aks dekhyo....kis tarah. love n peace jagdeep singh dhaliwal

Dhaliwala bahut vadhiya likha yaar...
Sachi dil nu chu gaya ...
Fer 22 kisda hain...
Salleya hun likda rahi....bahut vadhiya likiya......Balle o tere

GURU GOBIND SINGH maharaj JI ne khasle nu
Anakh te sveman naal shir talli te thar ke Turna sikhya
Guru GOBIND JI ne khande de dharo eis khom nu jaman de ke
Oh mouto parra edha la dita dera
Amrit shaka ke amar kitta
Eis nu hanere ch kadeya eis nu vekhya savera
Farhaeya hammesha lai bhani da palha
Te yodha bhan ke anakh naal jinna sikhya
Rakh ke shir theli te
Tega diyan dhara te nachna sihkya..........Fateh!!!!!

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je tusi aa sara aap likheya tan bohooooot hi vadiya g........main gal taan aahi hundi aa ke kise ne kucch aap likheya...kucch creative kita,,,,,,,,,so jus keep it up ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,fer ton g bohot sohna likheyaaaaaaaa.......

[Jatt_On_Jauntz]

ssa ji
thanx for applause and now the gud news is that i hav written this myself

Originally Posted by sohni nashili jatti je tusi aa sara aap likheya tan bohooooot hi vadiya g........main gal taan aahi hundi aa ke kise ne kucch aap likheya...kucch creative kita,,,,,,,,,so jus keep it up ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,fer ton g bohot sohna likheyaaaaaaaa.......

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Originally Posted by Jatt_on_Jauntz Veer ssa ji thanx for applause and now the gud news is that i hav written this myself

ssa g...........ur w/c,,,,,,,je tusi aap likheya fer tan g tusi fatte chakte...coz aap kush likhna nale oh vi ena jayada nale sabton vadi gal ena sohnaaaaaaa bohot aukha hundaaaaaaaa,,,,,,,,so jus keep up d guuuuuud work .....lookin forward 2 read more from u............

[~UnLeAsHeD_GaBrU~]

WAAH MEREYA SHERA.. AVAI HE LIKHDA REH..

[Jatt_On_Jauntz]

hanji frnz ....main hindi ch likhan da panga leya c kafi der pehla ...post karda han pehli vari ki likya c hindi ch. chhotte hunde ton hi weak c hindi ....but i hav tried


TUM BIN
dil mein gham , ankh mein ansoo hai tum bin
jee raha hun bas ik teri yaad k sahare din gin gin
dost to hazaro hain yu meri kabar par rone k liye
par koi hamraaz nahi ....tum bin

andheri raat hai , chandni se roshan ye jahaan hai
fir bhi kyon hai bujh bujh sa dil ye mera...shayad tum bin
khoon k ansoo pee raha hun jene k vaste
aa jao ab na satao ab, nahi jee paunga main tum bin

saara jahan teri mohabbat haar k
jaan apni tere ishq mein vaar k
dekh vo ja raha hai deewana apni umar guzaar k
thaam lo bahon mein nahi mar payega aaj ..tum bin

gham kahan tak peeye hum, gham kahan tak sahe hum
tu jeye hazaaro baras bas yahi duaa kare hum
mat kar gumaan is jawani ka nahi rahogi tum bhi kamsin
hum udti dhool hi sahi jo tham jayegi ik din..tum bin

magar yaad rakhna nahi jee paoge tum bhi ....HUM BIN.

[Abchd]

ha ha ha ha

tum bin hum bin,,,,,,,,,,,,,aah ki aa,,,,,,,,,,,,,par wadhiya par mainu adhe akhar samajh hee nahin aaye..............

Originally Posted by Jatt_on_Jauntz Veer hanji frnz ....main hindi ch likhan da panga leya c kafi der pehla ...post karda han pehli vari ki likya c hindi ch. chhotte hunde ton hi weak c hindi ....but i hav tried TUM BIN dil mein gham , ankh mein ansoo hai tum bin jee raha hun bas ik teri yaad k sahare din gin gin dost to hazaro hain yu meri kabar par rone k liye par koi hamraaz nahi ....tum bin andheri raat hai , chandni se roshan ye jahaan hai fir bhi kyon hai bujh bujh sa dil ye mera...shayad tum bin khoon k ansoo pee raha hun jene k vaste aa jao ab na satao ab, nahi jee paunga main tum bin saara jahan teri mohabbat haar k jaan apni tere ishq mein vaar k dekh vo ja raha hai deewana apni umar guzaar k thaam lo bahon mein nahi mar payega aaj ..tum bin gham kahan tak peeye hum, gham kahan tak sahe hum tu jeye hazaaro baras bas yahi duaa kare hum mat kar gumaan is jawani ka nahi rahogi tum bhi kamsin hum udti dhool hi sahi jo tham jayegi ik din..tum bin magar yaad rakhna nahi jee paoge tum bhi ....HUM BIN.

[~UnLeAsHeD_GaBrU~]

Originally Posted by Jatt_on_Jauntz Veer hanji frnz ....main hindi ch likhan da panga leya c kafi der pehla ...post karda han pehli vari ki likya c hindi ch. chhotte hunde ton hi weak c hindi ....but i hav tried TUM BIN dil mein gham , ankh mein ansoo hai tum bin jee raha hun bas ik teri yaad k sahare din gin gin dost to hazaro hain yu meri kabar par rone k liye par koi hamraaz nahi ....tum bin andheri raat hai , chandni se roshan ye jahaan hai fir bhi kyon hai bujh bujh sa dil ye mera...shayad tum bin khoon k ansoo pee raha hun jene k vaste aa jao ab na satao ab, nahi jee paunga main tum bin saara jahan teri mohabbat haar k jaan apni tere ishq mein vaar k dekh vo ja raha hai deewana apni umar guzaar k thaam lo bahon mein nahi mar payega aaj ..tum bin gham kahan tak peeye hum, gham kahan tak sahe hum tu jeye hazaaro baras bas yahi duaa kare hum mat kar gumaan is jawani ka nahi rahogi tum bhi kamsin hum udti dhool hi sahi jo tham jayegi ik din..tum bin magar yaad rakhna nahi jee paoge tum bhi ....HUM BIN.

lolz.... good 1 hum tum

[Jatt_On_Jauntz]

sat sri akal dosto!!!
frnz this 1 is my new try to create heaven.....daas de ardaas hai KHUDA de dar te ....heela kita saath bhalda ha main.




RO REHA AJJ LOKO....

khabre kyon nahi ruk reha sailaab is khuni barsaat da,
zarra zarra ro reha loko ...ajj mere vassde punjab da,
kehri raat ne khaa leya chehra mere punjab da,
patta patta kir reha loko ajj mere hassde punjab da.
neele ambran te ghataa jehri chadh ayi, suraj kajjya hanere ne,
khaure kyo nahi ajj bolya kaag asaade banere te,
kyon nahi bohr dee chaave mastya baba ajj tash naal,
mukk gayi ajj tarj yaro payi c jhanjar jo mutiyar ne.
tap chukke ne panje aab, risde jakhma nu seh k raat nu v jo saunde na,
bedoshia de khoon nal ajj rangya hai varka sadi zindagi dee kitaab da,
punjab deya puttaran ne aape hi khanjar labhe,
"dhaliwala" shayad tu khud hi hathin fad katara vhinnya seena gulaab da.
maa de sanduk farole, rul gaye bhain dee guddi te patole,
lai botal ajj vehre vadya putt nawaab da,
nahss gayi seyalaa vali, tur gayi kacheya te tairan vali,
vadh chadde ne jand, kithe gaya seena janab da.
kithe gaye ne ajj shingaar punjab de,
kite bhangre, kite giddhe, kite tappe mahiye de,
kidhre peengha, kite kikklian, kidhre jor chenaab da,
"dhaliwala" ajj kalla kalla varka frol ....is vairaag da.

leyao khareed ajj koi mera BABA FARID,
hai ajj kithe BABA NANAK nankane vala,
sadd lao ja ajj patne da BAAJA VALA,
kithe hai MARDANA te geet rabaab da.....
ardaas hai meri ...........belio khirega fer saada eh PHULL GULAAB da.

lov n peace

[Jatt_on_Jaunt]

Originally Posted by Jatt_on_Jauntz Veer RO REHA AJJ LOKO.... khabre kyon nahi ruk reha sailaab is khuni barsaat da, zarra zarra ro reha loko ...ajj mere vassde punjab da, kehri raat ne khaa leya chehra mere punjab da, patta patta kir reha loko ajj mere hassde punjab da.

Balle oh shera
Bahut vadiyan laggi teri eh rachna ,,,
Par sab toh vadiyan menu eh lafaj lagge,,,
Sahi gal kitti eh tu apni eis rachan de vich...
Majjo mano yarra