Never Depend Upon Love

[just_an_angel]

Pyaar to ek sza hai, ise na aazmayega,
hum to kar chuke hain, aap na dohrayega,
kehte hai ishq to aag ka samundar hai zaalim,
is aag ki jalan buri, kabhi khud ko na jalayega,
waffa bhi rula deti hai kabhi, bewaffai se kya shikva,
ek duniya hi kaffi hai, naya jahan na banayega,
hum dete hai aapko ye mashvara, maan kar dekhye,
kabhi kisi ki khushi ke liye khud ko na tadpayega,
ye mohabbat ka datoor hai, yahan koi apna nahin,
badi mushkil hogi tumhe, kisi ko raazdaar na banayega........
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NEVER DEPEND UPON LOVE, THAT THE LOVE DEPEND UPON YOU!!!!!!

[just_an_angel]

yaar, koi reply nahin...atleast there must b some comppliments abt it, nahi changa laga taan comments hi de do

[~Made.In.Punjab~]

lol... nah, it was good. I guess no one was in sad enough a mood to comment on that

Waheguru Ang Sang Sahayi
Balraj Singh

[Rahul]

lolz i am sure angel u havent write it urself :P
if u have gr8 wrk
keep it up
Rahul

[~Jamuni~]

yaar......these kinds of poems are a big turn off........why do u wanna depress other people .......love is such a beautiful thing.........to kya hua agar wo apne saath thode dukh lata hai.........i dont think u should stop loving for the fear of getting sad some day........just like u cant stop living for the fear of dying.....so cheer up and tell people to fall in love not run away from love

[just_an_angel]

thanx pec,
nd being honest maine khud likha hain.
Nd Shikha, i m not making anyone sad or depressed but khushi nd gam goes hand in hand.........hum yahan itna hanste hain, thoda rona bhi to zaroori hai na...

[~Jamuni~]

Originally Posted by just_an_angel thanx pec, nd being honest maine khud likha hain. Nd Shikha, i m not making anyone sad or depressed but khushi nd gam goes hand in hand.........hum yahan itna hanste hain, thoda rona bhi to zaroori hai na...

hmmmmmmm....i think humme apne dukh hi bahot hain......baakiyon ke sunke aur bhi dukh hota hai.........but u r more than welcome to share ur dukhs with us......personally, i hate depressing ppl with my sad stories

[just_an_angel]

Originally Posted by shikha hmmmmmmm....i think humme apne dukh hi bahot hain......baakiyon ke sunke aur bhi dukh hota hai.........but u r more than welcome to share ur dukhs with us......personally, i hate depressing ppl with my sad stories

well miss, i wasn't sharing any dukh vukh of mine, it was just a thought nd was in general, ki yaar...koi gal nahi, agli waari ethe wadiya jeha hasaan waala likhongi

[~Jamuni~]

lolz.........just_an_angel........that was just my view........u can post whatever u want

[!!!Itz_JaTT_sTyLe]

That was awesum... nice !!

Gr8 goin angel ..... I hope to hear sum more frm U!!

[just_an_angel]

one thing i would like to share for the last line of my poetry:


pyaar karo, nibhao v, but yaar pta when there is a break-up, nd the person with whom u have shared all things( may b ur best frnd or ur love), leaks all abt ur break-up or whatever things, its really embarrassing, isliye i believe kabhi kisi ko raazdaar na banayega.........but what if it ur own love?????

pyaar to pyaar hai, pyaar kya izhaar kya kije,
jab yaar hi bewaffa ho, to khud pe aitbaar kya kije!!

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[just_an_angel]

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