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Old 23-02-2005, 12:37 AM   #1 (permalink)
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A sad story

Sad Sad story...



Jenny was so happy about the house they had found.
For once in her life 'twas on the right side of town.
She unpacked her things with such great ease.
As she watched her new curtains blow in the breeze.
How wonderful it was to have her own room.
School would be starting; she'd have friends over soon.
There'd be sleep-overs, and parties; she was so happy
It's just the way she wanted her life to be.

On the first day of school, everything went great.
She made new friends and even got a date!
She thought, "I want to be popular and I'm going to be,
Because I just got a date with the star of the team!"
To be known in this school you had to have clout,
And dating this guy would sure help her out.
There was only one problem stopping her fate.
Her parents had said she was too young to date.
"Well I just won't tell them the entire truth.
They won't know the difference; what's there to lose?"
Jenny asked to stay with her friends that night.
Her parents frowned but said, "All right." Excited,
she got ready for the big event
But as she rushed around like she had no sense,
She began to feel guilty about all the lies,
But what's a pizza, a party, and a moonlight ride?

Well the pizza was good, and the party was great,
But the moonlight ride would have to wait.
For Dan was half drunk by this time.
But he kissed her and said that he was just fine.
Then the room filled with smoked and Dan took a puff.
Jenny couldn't believe he was smoking that stuff.
Now Dan was ready to ride to the point
But only after he'd smoked another joint.
They jumped in the car for the moonlight ride,
Not thinking that he was too drunk to drive.

They finally made it to the point at last,
And Dan started trying to make a pass.
A pass is not what Jenny wanted at all
(and by a pass, I don't mean playing football.)
"Perhaps my parents were right....maybe I am too young.
Boy, how could I ever, ever be so dumb."
With all of her might, she pushed Dan away:
"Please take me home, I don't want to stay."
Dan cranked up the engine and floored the gas.
In a matter of seconds they were going too fast.

As Dan drove on in a fit of wild anger,
Jenny knew that her life was in danger.
She begged and pleaded for him to slow down,
But he just got faster as they neared the town.
"Just let me get home! I'll confess that I lied.
I really went out for a moonlight ride."
Then all of a sudden, she saw a big flash.
"Oh God, Please help us! We're going to crash!"
She doesn't remember the force of impact.
Just that everything all of a sudden went black.
She felt someone remove her from the twisted rubble,
And heard, "call an ambulance! These kids are in trouble!
Voices she heard...a few words at best.
But she knew there were two cars involved in the wreck.
Then wondered to herself if Dan was all right,
And if the people in the other car were alive.

She awoke in the hospital to faces so sad.
"You've been in a wreck and it looks pretty bad."
These voices echoed inside her head,
As they gently told her that Dan was dead.
They said "Jenny, we've done all we can do.
But it looks as if we'll lose you too."
"But the people in the other car!?" Jenny cried.
"We're sorry, Jenny, they also died."
Jenny prayed, "God, forgive me for what I've done
I only wanted to have just one night of fun."
"Tell those people's family, I've made their lives dim,
And wish I could return their families to them."
"Tell Mom and Dad I'm sorry I lied,
And that it's my fault so many have died.
Oh, nurse, won't you please tell them that for me?"
The nurse just stood there-she never agreed.
But took Jenny's hand with tears in her eyes.
And a few moments later Jenny died.

A man asked the nurse, "Why didn't you do your best
To bid that girl her one last request?"
She looked at the man with eyes so sad.
"Because the people in the other car were her mom and dad.
" This story is sad and unpleasant but true,
So young people take heed, it could have been you.
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Old 23-02-2005, 12:50 AM   #2 (permalink)
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oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooh shikhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa shit man!!!!!!!!!!!!
oh my goddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd
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Old 23-02-2005, 01:30 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: A sad story

too bad nd tragic....i hope we all learn sumthin from the end....nd there occurs never another sad story like this.
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Old 23-02-2005, 09:11 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Re: A sad story

very tragic.... ..I think youngsters should learn a lesson from this story.

But one thing I was thinking whole day......If the nurse would have told the girl that the other people who died were her mod & dad.....
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Old 23-02-2005, 09:15 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Re: A sad story

hmmmm....then the girl would have died with a greater burden on her heart..........in the story she died with just the knowledge that she hurt her parents.......imagine how she would have felt if she knew she killed them...........her death would not have been peaceful at alll
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Old 23-02-2005, 09:18 PM   #6 (permalink)
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but when she would have reached heaven.....then it may be a big shock for her.......
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Old 23-02-2005, 09:23 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Re: A sad story

hmmmmm....i dont think that far ahead........i believe in heaven and hell but i dont think abt it like that............i think a peaceful deahth is more important than heaven...........depends on ur belief...........i hate giving bad news to people.......and when they r sad it is even worse.......so i would do the same as the nurse...........what do u think?
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Old 23-02-2005, 09:38 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Re: A sad story

I don't believe in heaven & hell.......ur right peacefull death is more imp. than anything........I think nurse was right.....but will her soul be in peace...even after not hearing the sad news........
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so saaaaaaaaaddddddddd and touching too,, ,,thats why i hate drugs and drinks,,,,,,,,pata nahi kis manhoos ne eh cheezan baniyan ne .....and i agree with shikha,,,,nurse did the right thing,,,,its so hard to give a bad news to anybody,,,,and moreover tht gal was on her way to death,,,,,,atleast she died in somewht peace.
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sob sob
I don't think she was all wrong, alot of youngsters do that...but her fate was tooooooooo sad
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Re: A sad story

aawwwwwwwwwwww
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Re: A sad story

hey........we shd all learn a lesson and stay away from drugs and drinks coz it makes ur life miserable and like u can read in the story can even cause harm to others and specially to your loved one's........
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a sad story bahut lambi nale meri dictionary vi nahi labb rahi fer karda reply , 3 -4 din lag jane...............
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mennu punjabi ch samjao.lolzzz
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