30-07-2005, 04:35 AM
|
#3 (permalink)
|
| | Re: Ghazal
likhi tu ghazal be-wafayi yara..
parhke mainu badi neend aayi yara..
nah.. I'm just kidding.. that was a beautiful ghazal. A good effort. Just a few words from me: Quote: |
Originally Posted by Razia .............Ghazal..........Kaka Gill
Milaange ikk din zaroor udeek meri toon karni
Bass eni hor kar kar mere te inaayat yaaraa | Na karin intzaar, na vekhin rah mera..
Na karin intzaar, na vekhin rah mera..
yakeen mainu meri manzil te hai.. ehna rahan te nahin..!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Balraj Singh
30-07-05
Waheguru Ang Sang Sahayi | | |
| |  |