| Re: Raatan Jaag jaag kattan!
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Originally Posted by life_on_the_rocks Saari saari raat katdan deeveyan di lau vekh ke,
firdan bhaldan guache yaar... deeveyan di lau vekh ke,
kaaga ud ja banere ton,
saade ghar na kise ne aauna...
jinha sajna dee udeek saanu,
ohne murd na kade aauna...
j Kade sajan murdeya tan aauga masana ch,
Addy te balde deeveyan di lau vekh ke. | good work keep it up Addy...i like ur poems coz u seem to add a bit humor to the sadness...lol...j/k Ady...keep it up...and shabash for the excellent presentation...u see LC te Ady te Angel varge smart bunde vi haige ne....hehehehe | | |